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Bless The Broken Road [Version 2] *Gift*

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Bless The Broken Road 2


I set away from home and walked along the long road
Alone I walked it without love and no one there for me
I got lost in this world so many times
No direction and no destination only the stars above me shined the way

A way I didn't know where it will lead me
And the road kept on going like infinity
I lost so much time and started to give in
All my dreams felt like a burden on my shoulders

And the little love I had in my heart felt like a knife stabbing through my heart
But then after walking this long and narrow road you found me
You showed me compassion and the comfort of your love
Your arms reached me and saved me from this lone world

Your eyes big as the blue ocean I lose myself in them
Your heart big as the eternal sky I can fly in
And the love you gave me is so vast and beautiful
My life is happier now that I am with you

I am happy to be with you and feel your love
There is nothing else in the world I would like to have
When I am with you nothing else matters
When I am with you everything feels so good

You make me laugh and every moment with you is like dream come true
Every long lost dream led me to where you are
The time stops just for us
Forever together and beyond the infinity I shall be with you

I think about the years I spent just passing through
I'd like to have the time I lost and give it back to you
But you just smile and take my hand
You've been there you understand
It's all part of a grander plan that is love

When I am with you the world is irrelevant
All that matters is to be with you in your arms
To love you till the final moment of the time
To stay next to you and love you even more then yesterday

Now hear these words and know they are true
I LOVE YOU!
Bless The Broken Road [Version 1]: [link]



This poem is a gift for :icon7theaven: and his mate :);):)

I've been talking to him and what I tolled him was that what I wrote isn't good enough and this just confirms it *sadly this isn't good at all for me*


So I want to say that I am sorry since I failed to deliver a good poem. :(

Inspiration came from this song:

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Rascal Flatts - Bless The Broken Road: [link]
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So I hope you like this :)

I used some of the lyrics of the song! So all rights for the song go to their respectful owners!
© 2012 - 2024 willyoudieforme
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sYnister26's avatar
I dont think it's bad at all ^^ the poem's message is really strong and most of it really hits home... Thanks for writing this amazing piece <3