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Freedom


What is to be free?
A simple dream which we all want to achieve.
But that dream is a hard one.
There are things we need to over take before we reach freedom.

So many boundaries lie before the path of freedom.
And chains try to bind us into the prison of control.
Every way we turn we see walls.
Walls which block our way.

In this world freedom is just an empty word.
Darkness and despair controlling the lives of ordinary people.
Every where we go is dark and cold as a prison.
Dreams don't exist!

The only thing left to believe is for someone to come and save us.
Someone to show us how to be free.
Being free means to dream.
Dreams define our existence.

They show us our future.
The future which is bright.
Dreaming big is the only way to be free in this chained world.
World of despair and depression.

But one day our dreams will set us free.
To be free is everyone's goal.
A goal towards freedom.
Dreams will set us free.

From these chains of this God forsaken world.
So being free means to dream big.
And never to look back at the chained world.
Freedom is everyone's right!
This is my entry for the contest of this group :iconwriters--club:

And this time we have to write about "Freedom"

So this is what I came up with. It's nothing big of a deal but I like it and I hope I advance to the final round :D
Well actually I don't care that much. After all this contest is not to fight but to have fun and to see if you are talented or you have an amazing luck in passing through the 3 rounds :)
I got lucky in the first round, so lets see will I get lucky again and go to the final round :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

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Inspiration: Fairy Tail OST - Seireiou (Lullaby & Deliora Theme): [link]
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Hope you like it :):):):):)
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pokemin1 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
This is amazing <3
When I go in here to find poems, I mostly just read the first 2 lines, and I close the tab.. But this caught my eyes and my attention.. It absolutely amazing... keep up the good work! 
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blackrose4699 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Student Writer
its making me cry
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Student Filmographer
Making you cry in the good or the bad way?
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blackrose4699 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Student Writer
good
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Student Filmographer
Oh that's good to hear :)
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
Wonderful=)=)=)
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Student Filmographer
Thanks :)
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012
Welcome:D
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Student Filmographer
:)
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
=)
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