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Memories of the Past


Do you remember the blue summer sky?
Free of clouds and full of dreams
Our lives were so wonderful
All day long together with friends free of all worries

Do you remember the bikes that we used to ride?
I remember riding till the very end of the sunlight
All those times we fall and then got back up again
I remember all of it all the fun that was to be together

Do you remember the nights?
Nights full of games of hide and seek
And the fireflies were the only thing that shined in the dark
Also the sound of the crickets that echoes till the dawn

I remember all of that with sorrow in my heart
The way we were young and carefree
All of those memories now rest in our heads or in pictures
But I shall never forget about them

Nor will you forget about our time of joy
You remember it right?
The time when we were kids of the province
When we didn't have all those shiny technology

When we used sticks as a sort of fun
And to tell you the truth it was more fun back then than now
Even going out in the hottest hours of the days
All of that was amazing

All the games and all the laughter is what I remember the most
I remember being with you all day long and playing
You were the brother I never had and I loved you deeply because of that
Without you my childhood would have never been this awesome

So I ask you this,
Do you remember our secret place?
The place of all of our little secrets which were never told
The place we made a blood contract to be brothers forever

I remember it very well and I still go there
To remind myself for all the good old times
To feel the nostalgic felling and to know that I am old
But I visit it the most so I can remember you and me laughing

Chasing fireflies in the night
Playing with the dogs and cats in the day
Being with friends and laughing
Living the life of a child!
I like to write about the past :D:D:D


I really love to write about childhood a lot because all of us have awesome memories form back then and we all love that time :):):):):)

And this is my second poem on this topic
Here is the link for the first one: [link]

Also since I am not fan of happy endings I've written this poem with a sad ending, this is the happy ending.

The link for the sad ending: [link]


Inspiration: Full Metal Alchemist OST 1 - Brothers: [link]

Hope you like it :)
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guitarangel1495 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
i luv the optimistic tone, its nice to look back at things that happened with a sense of carefree bliss rather than regret as i so often do
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Student Filmographer
Yeah, i tried to write it as much as positive I could :) the past is a gold mine for me :) Times change and so does people, but as long as we have awesome *:la:* memories we will be awesome too :la::D:)
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Bullcross Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Оказва се, че си българин :D:D:D:D Не очаквах :D
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Student Filmographer
Да, така е :D:D:D аз имам навика да преглеждам хората който коментират нещата ми и какво да видя, ти си от България :D:D:):):):):)
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cskadoz Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012   General Artist
i really like voice tone vision and imagery :thumbsup:
:twocents: several typos and the line, "Nor will you forget . . . " followed by, "You remember it right?" reads very odd. suggest you tighten the whole piece for clarity & flow. easiest way is to read aloud.
"poetry is writ to be read aloud."___J T Stewart
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Student Filmographer
Thank you :)
About the things you mentioned: It came to me like that and I didn't want to change it :D:D:):):):)
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Bullcross Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, mate, this is so much better than the front page, it's almost criminal :D! Brings me back memories T-T You did your job. I think rhymed would be also great, even stronger. Awesome idea and execution *__* Going to check out the sad ending
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Student Filmographer
Ах мерси много :):blushes:
Когато пиша от този сорт го правя нарочно с цел да накарам спомените на хората да им идват :):D:D:)
Може, не съм се пробвал, но ще трябва :)
ОК :)
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