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Tale Of The Forefathers



The sun rises to shine over the green lands.
The warm light revives the sleeping plants.
All that is now sleeping starts to wake up.
The birds start to sing the morning songs of joy.

The forest animals start to come out of the dents.
The air is filled with the smell of fresh grass.
All starts to come to life as spring arrives.
The forest now is full of life.

Young ones now learn how to live in this world.
Parents guide them through the unknown.
Their footsteps are at first unsure but later they become full of life.
The voice of happiness of the young ones now echoes across the lands.

A father wolf shows his son the lands.
The young wolf gazes upon the endless green field.
All the animals run through the grass with grace.
The young ones follow their parents step by step.

Around the river all the forest animals are gathered.
They enjoy the fresh water of the mountains.
The youngsters are afraid of their reflection in the water.
A feast is happening around the river.

Now the last snow melts away and gives way for the warm.
Everything lives under the warm lights of the sun.
Once asleep and now reawakened.
The spirit of the forefathers lives inside the new generation.

Their pride now rests in the soul and hears of all the young ones.
It's said that old die to make way for the young ones.
But that isn't true at all, they never died.
Their hearts, souls, pride lives in each and every new creature.

They never left this world, they are right besides us.
Giving us the strength and will to move one.
They watch us over and guide us to the right path.
That's their role as our forefathers!
A little something I wrote after listening to some very cool songs :):):):)

This poem has kinda two meanings :D:D:D:D:D:D

One of them is the reawakening of all those animals who are sleeping and also the arrival of the spring :)

And the second meaning is the tale of our forefathers. How they watch over us, guide us and help us.


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Inspiration:

The Lion King - He Lives in You: [link]

Quest For Camelot - On My Fathers Wings: [link]
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Hope you enjoy :)

Little note: I think this is my best poem ever written. I don't care if doesn't get many views or faves. For me its the best thing that I have ever written!
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
Very Nice:D
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Student Filmographer
Thanks :)
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012
Welcome=)
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Student Filmographer
:)
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012
=)
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Student Filmographer
:)
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012
=)
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:)
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PowerfulStardust Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012
Wow...that little something you wrote...amazing ....
i enjoyed each line of your awesome poem! :star:
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Student Filmographer
Thanks :)

P.S. It will take me at least one more week before I answer to you :( Sorry for that, no free time at all :(
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PowerfulStardust Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012
YOU ARE WELCOME :)

P.S. :cry: i wish i could do something about this...i love fast answers ohhh i hope i will survive :cry:
*she waves her magic wand...lets make ONE or MORE WEEK seam like ONE DAY*
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Student Filmographer
:)

P.S. Well in this busy world fast is just another word for slow. But now I will answer :)
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Isiri-Blackthorn Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
So, totally random, I definitely have that picture hanging on my wall right next to my computer.

By the way, the poem was great!
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Student Filmographer
That's awesome :):):) It's an amazing picture :)

Thank you :)
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Wolves02 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Student Artisan Crafter
Lovely!
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Student Filmographer
Thanks :)
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Wolves02 Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Student Artisan Crafter
ur welcome :)
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Student Filmographer
:)
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Ookami-Chi Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012
this i absolutely beautiful <3
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Student Filmographer
Thank you :)
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SnickerOats Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
That was well written, it left me speechless. Well done, it gave me another perspective of nature. Thank you!!
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Student Filmographer
Thank you very much :):):)
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SnickerOats Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
You plan on writing anything else. I would love to read some more.
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Student Filmographer
Well I write 3 times a week at max :) Well you could look through my gallery I have some other poems that are good :)
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SnickerOats Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Ok, cool!!
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Student Filmographer
:)
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Volodymyr-Bilyk Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Professional General Artist
Too long.
Too much of pathos.
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Student Filmographer
You don't have to read it if you don't want to!
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Volodymyr-Bilyk Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Professional General Artist
That's not an excuse
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Student Filmographer
No it's not! But let me ask you this: Why did you even bothered to read and write a comment when you didn't like it?
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Kalina1176 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Student General Artist
I have a glow in the dark puzzle of that picture! :dummy:
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Student Filmographer
That's awesome :la::la::la::la::la::la::)
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raebearlawl Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012
i love the background.
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Student Filmographer
Yeah me too :):D:) It's awesome :)
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Wolvengra Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice!
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Student Filmographer
Thanks :)
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BlueWolf100 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Student Filmographer
the picture is awesome :) and i like the story too
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Student Filmographer
Thank you :) I put the link in the description from where I found it :)
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WolfSkater63 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012
Coolness
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Student Filmographer
Thanks :D:):):):)
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WolfSkater63 Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012
You're Welcome!
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Student Filmographer
:)
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